jane kyon likh raha hoon!
likhne to kuchh nahi fir bhi likh raha hoon
jane kyon kyon likh raha hoon!
koi sun-ne, koi padhne wala hota, to bhi likhta
batane ko kuchh naya hota to bhi likhta
suhana mausam hota to bhi likhta
jane kyon likh raha hoon!
arsenal CL jeeti hoti to bhi likhta
sharapova FO jeet-ti to bhi likhta
Federer unbeaten hota to bhi likhta
jane kyon likh raha hoon!
Hades ko haraya hota to bhi likhta
Bond ko maar giraya hota to bhi likhta
Pasha ko chhakaya hota to bhi likhta
jane kyon likh raha hoon!
'Bhagwann' ke darshan hote to bhi likhta
topcoding mein top hota to bhi likhta
aiming mein bond hota to bhi likhta
jane kyon likh raha hoon!
'Legend' hota to bhi likhta
final jitaya hota to bhi likhta
naya pj koi banaya hota to bhi likhta
jane kyon likh raha hoon!
Laloo ki kaon-kaon sunta to bhi likhta
Khullar ki deenge sunta to bhi likhta
'Ravs' 8 rupaye mangta to bhi likhta
jane kyon likh raha hoon!
Baap ki shaadi hoti to bhi likhta
Murgi milta dust2 mein to bhi likhta
Shomu 'nahi yaar' kehta to bhi likhta
jane kyon likh raha hoon!
'Aam' aadmi hota to bhi likhta
Caesar ka 'khaas' hota to bhi likhta
Bhagwann ke paas hota to bhi likhta
jane kyon likh raha hoon!
'AKS' ki photography dekhta to bhi likhta
Bater ki kavita padhta to bhi likhta
Pille ki BC sunta to bhi likhta
jane kyon likh raha hoon!
'DJ Aakash' ka dance dekhta to bhi likhta
Virmani ka romance dekhta to bhi likhta
Suttu ko foonkte, Jhinge ko peete dekhta to bhi likhta
jane kyon likh raha hoon!
Andy se movie review leta to bhi likhta
Sandy se 'Bhagwann' sunta to bhi likhta
Suar sentiyaap pelta to bhi likhta
jane kyon likh raha hoon!
Surdy ka logic sunta to woh bhi likhta
Suchi ka gaana sunta to bhi likhta
Ankit ka bajana sunta to use bhi likhne ki koshish karta
jane kyon likh raha hoon!
'kisi' ne kaha hota to bhi likhta
mohabbat ki hoti agar to bhi likhta
woh yeh blog padhte to bhi likhta
jane kyon likh raha hoon!
Shayad kuchh kehna chahta hoon!
Lokendra Kaushik 'Aasan'
Dedicated to the class of 2006.
posted by Loki at 7:43 AM
10 Comments:
waah!! kafi kuchh likh diya kuchh nahi hote hue bhi :P. a few points that u left out were, ironically, bout urslef.... like -
agar baasuri pakar kar chhat par photo shoot karayi hoti,
to bhi likhta....
usne woh rose accept ki hoti,
to bhi likhta.....
yeh mujhe pata hai kyun nahi likha :D
do hath apna mere haathon mein
abhi kuch aur kadam chalte hain
kuch bhi agar na ho apna
ham paane ki chahat mein jeete hain
4 saal mein kya paya?? kya khoya??
pata nahi!!
par us 4 saal ko har pal mein ham jeet hain
log kahte hain jeene ke liye hawa ki jaroorat hoti hai, kambkhat saanso mein tujhe hi toh peete hain..
thnx aak and laloo. DJ saale yeh sab yahan kyon likh raha hai, aur waise bhi purani baat hai. Laloo tum to sentiyape ke badshah hote jaa rahe ho!
aapki khidmat mein :P
sorry comment itnni der se likh raha hun...lekin phir bhi man kya ke kuchh likh hi deta hun...padh kar bahut achha sa laga..keep blogging
hey! thnx dk, aaj kal to time hi nahi milta.
Whoa! Nice pice of poetry there... apart from the lovely rhythm it feels nice to see his multiple references to God. After repeated days of katwaana, finally something to feel good about.
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Here we finally have a poet of talent who lays bare 4 years of college life in a succint piece of verse that is at once elaborate and crisp. Although many comments try to imitate, nothing compares to the original and I think we are witnessing the birth of a great artist... Get hold of this poem on a piece of paper from the man himself folks... coz someday it'll be auctioned for a million as a first edition at Sotheby's
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Well nice to hear something from the master critic. I accept the criticism(is it? rahter gives a present feeling), but 'd like to explain something. I started writing the poem while i was all alone in my house, and those events hppnd, like arsenal and king Federer loosing, basically nothing going rite for me; but then i suddenly started missing my college days and thus the poem took its present form.
Master at Work :D
u stopped blogging ??
kinda stopped...not finding the time
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